A hypertext tale by Walter Sorrells


"Keep the change," the out-of-town guy was saying.

Roland McKenry, Jr., President of the Farmers Community Bank of Buford, South Carolina, knew the guy was from out of town for several reasons.

First, Roland McKenry, Jr. had spent most of his life in Buford and knew everybody in the town. Second, the guy's suit was way too nice. Custom made, from the looks of it. Probably the guy was not even from Columbia or Charleston. It looked like a suit you'd see on a guy from New York, Milan, London. Maybe Atlanta. Maybe.

Roland McKenry, Jr. was a nice-looking man, nearing forty, with blond hair that could have stood a cut about two weeks earlier, a cleft chin, and a truly horrible rust colored suit. You'd have thought from the way he dressed that he was a man who wouldn't know whether a suit was from Milan or from Boise. But Roland McKenry, Jr. was a guy who could fool you.

Then the out-of-town guy made the crack about his own suit. Which, as it happened, was from J.C. Penney.

Naturally Roland took a closer look at the guy when he got a chance, turning around at his desk and pretending to think about something while he stared at the out-of-town guy.

Once you put aside the suit and actually looked at the man's face, you got a different impression. Not a New York or Milan kind of face. More of thug face, really. Back when Roland had been in college he'd made a brief foray into the commercial dope trade, sold a few ounces of shit here and there -- and that's what this guy put him in mind of: this asshole he'd had to deal with once when he was buying weed by the pound.

Roland's connection had been a Texan, a short guy who always wore giant high-heeled cowboy boots, who was shipping pot up from Brownsville by Greyhound bus. He packed the dope in Coleman coolers, fifty pounds a throw, sealed them with silicone caulk, threw them on the bus and let 'em ride.

Later Roland had found out the guy had just got out of the Allen Unit of the Texas pen, serving time for murder. It was that guy's face alone -- nothing he'd said or done -- that had convinced Roland to get out of the dope business.

"Whatchya thinking?"

Roland blinked. It was Noreen, the teller that had such a crush on him. Roland noticed the out-of- town guy was gone.

"What did that guy want?" Roland said.

"Cash a check."

"How much?"

"Twelve dollars and fifty seven cent," Noreen said. She held up some change between two red painted fingernails. "Left his money, too. Whatchya want me to do with it, Mr. McKenry?"

Roland shrugged. "Keep it. Why not."

Cashing a check for twelve bucks? That guy, with his thousand dollar suit and his thug face? Something wasn't right. Damned if he could figure what it was, though.

But then on a whim he went outside, and there was the guy in the suit getting in the car with a thin fellow wearing over- alls and another guy sitting already in the passenger seat. Come to think of it, the guy with the over-alls didn't look like the over-all type anymore than the other guy looked like the thousand dollar suit type. Thug was the word that came to mind.

The guy had backed into the parking space, so Roland could see the license plate.

KST-464.

© 1995 Walter Sorrells
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